Doom Repercussions Of Evil

2002Copypasta / fan fiction / snowclone templateclassic

Also known as: Repercussions of Evil ยท Peter Chimaera Doom fanfic

Doom Repercussions Of Evil is a 2002 Doom fan fiction by Peter Chimaera, known for terrible grammar and the twist: "No, John. You are the demons. And then John was a zombie.

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil is a 211-word Doom fan fiction written by Fanfiction.net user Peter Chimaera in 2002, famous for its deliberately terrible grammar and the twist ending "No, John. You are the demons / And then John was a zombie"1. The story spent years in obscurity before a YTMND dramatic reading in 2006 launched it into meme status, spawning thousands of parody variations, a TV Tropes trope, and an unlikely connection to official Doom canon7.

TL;DR

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil is a 211-word Doom fan fiction written by Fanfiction.net user Peter Chimaera in 2002, famous for its deliberately terrible grammar and the twist ending "No, John.

Overview

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil tells the story of John Stalvern, a space marine who has spent fourteen years expecting a demon attack on his UAC base. When the demons arrive, his superior "Cernel Joson" orders him to fight. John grabs his "palsma rifle" and engages a cyberdemon, but the ceiling collapses and traps them both. Then the radio delivers the famous line: "No, John. You are the demons." And then John was a zombie1.

The story packs an absurd amount of narrative into just 211 words2. Every line is quotable, from the father's warning "You will BE KILL BY DEMONS" to the demons' panicked "HE GOING TO KILL US" to John's battle tactic of having "plasmaed at him." The writing style is a master class in wrong tenses ("gotted," "oldered," "crackered"), misspellings ("palsma," "listenend"), and rank confusion ("Cernel Joson")6.

What makes it work as a meme is the structure. The story follows a rigid template: character waits, flashback to a childhood warning, radio call to action, brief fight, ceiling collapse, twist ending. That template turned out to be infinitely adaptable6.

Peter Chimaera first appeared on Fanfiction.net on March 19, 2002, posting a story called "Digimon Savez The Wrold!1111." Despite the obvious spelling disasters, reviewers responded positively and encouraged more submissions4. On June 25, 2002, Chimaera published DOOM: Repercussions of Evil1. Fanfiction.net moderators eventually removed it for its "intentionally and exceedingly poor grammar, spelling, and style"1.

Peter Chimaera was not a real person. The Fanfiction.net user Hyena1 revealed on his personal site that Chimaera was an alternate account he used specifically for posting badly written fan fiction4. The real author, Tom White (who also went by the handle "Heisanevilgenius"), later confirmed the story was always meant as a stealth parody of poorly written fan fiction2. As TV Tropes notes, writing that badly for seven years straight "seems suspicious," and those who were suspicious turned out to be right2.

Chimaera's only Doom story, it sat alongside fan fiction for other franchises including The Matrix, Castlevania, and Batman, all written with the same joyfully broken English1.

Origin & Background

Platform
Fanfiction.net (original publication), YTMND / 4chan (viral spread)
Key People
Tom White aka "Hyena" / "Heisanevilgenius"
Date
2002
Year
2002

Peter Chimaera first appeared on Fanfiction.net on March 19, 2002, posting a story called "Digimon Savez The Wrold!1111." Despite the obvious spelling disasters, reviewers responded positively and encouraged more submissions. On June 25, 2002, Chimaera published DOOM: Repercussions of Evil. Fanfiction.net moderators eventually removed it for its "intentionally and exceedingly poor grammar, spelling, and style".

Peter Chimaera was not a real person. The Fanfiction.net user Hyena1 revealed on his personal site that Chimaera was an alternate account he used specifically for posting badly written fan fiction. The real author, Tom White (who also went by the handle "Heisanevilgenius"), later confirmed the story was always meant as a stealth parody of poorly written fan fiction. As TV Tropes notes, writing that badly for seven years straight "seems suspicious," and those who were suspicious turned out to be right.

Chimaera's only Doom story, it sat alongside fan fiction for other franchises including The Matrix, Castlevania, and Batman, all written with the same joyfully broken English.

How It Spread

For the first four years after publication, Repercussions of Evil existed in near-total obscurity. That changed on April 19, 2006, when YTMND user Orlics created a page titled "DOOM: Repercussions of Evil" featuring a screenshot of the original Fanfiction.net post alongside a dramatic reading of the text. A second YTMND by user IWanaSoftTaco followed on May 12, 2006, with its own dramatic reading. The YTMND community embraced it, producing remixes and radio theater performances.

The story hit 4chan on July 25, 2007, when it was posted to the /b/ board. Users responded by creating illustrations of scenes from the story. An Encyclopedia Dramatica entry for Peter Chimaera appeared on July 7, 2007. Responding to the sudden interest, White republished the story and Chimaera's other removed works on a new website, PeterChimaera.com, launched December 2, 2007.

On February 11, 2008, Fanfiction.net user Osaka420 submitted "Doom: Repercussions of Evil Mark II," a complete rewrite in proper English that preserved the plot while giving it legitimate prose. A Garry's Mod adaptation by YouTuber riff1 appeared on June 5, 2008. On December 13, 2010, Newgrounds user Phobotech uploaded a Flash animation inspired by the story that pulled in over 105,000 views.

The story's twist ending proved so iconic that on August 3, 2010, TV Tropes created a dedicated trope page called "And Then John Was a Zombie," using the story as the trope namer for any plot where a protagonist literally becomes the monster they were fighting.

How to Use This Meme

The most common way people deploy Repercussions of Evil is through the snowclone template. Pick any franchise, game, or situation, then follow the structure:

1

The wait. "[Character] waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were [enemies] in the base."

2

The childhood flashback. Character tells dad they want to join [profession]. Dad says "No! You will BE KILL BY [enemies]."

3

The radio call. "This is [authority figure]" the radio crackered. "You must fight the [enemies]!"

4

The brief fight. Character "gotted his palsma rifle" (or equivalent weapon).

5

The ceiling. "But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill."

6

The twist. "No, [character]. You are the [enemies]." And then [character] was a [monster].

Cultural Impact

The story named a TV Tropes trope. "And Then John Was a Zombie" now covers any narrative where a protagonist literally transforms into the thing they were fighting, with examples cataloged across anime, film, television, and video games. The trope page lists hundreds of examples from media including Attack on Titan, Bleach, Dragon Ball Z, and The Walking Dead.

The story's influence on actual Doom canon, whether intentional or coincidental, became a running joke in the community. When Doom (2016) and Doom Eternal introduced lore elements that mirrored the fan fiction's plot points, fans treated it as vindication. TV Tropes lists the story under "Vindicated by History," noting a "new-found appreciation" after the modern games seemed to adapt its dialogue into official lore.

Peter Chimaera's other works, including a Batman fan fiction and two self-published books ("Peter Chimaera book of hsitorical faFfiction" and "Dracula 2010 and other things bu Peter Chimaera"), are available for purchase on the self-publishing platform Lulu.

Full History

The story's structure turned it into one of the internet's most prolific snowclone templates. The rigid format, character waits, childhood flashback, radio order, brief fight, ceiling collapse, twist, made swapping in new properties trivially easy. The 1d4chan wiki compiled a massive collection of variants: X-COM versions where "And then John was a Chryssalid," Zentraedi versions with Macross characters, and dozens of others spanning every fandom imaginable. The template's adaptability meant communities could claim their own version without needing to understand the original Doom reference.

On DeviantArt, artists produced visual interpretations of the story alongside snowclone comics using the "No X, You are the Y" format. The phrase itself broke free from the story entirely, becoming a standalone punchline for any absurd identity-swap twist.

A recurring bit of community etiquette emerged around the story: it became "common courtesy to write a review of this Fan Fic as if it's a literary classic studied in English classes". This play-along joke, treating the 211-word mess as serious literature worthy of academic analysis, added another layer to the meme. The Library of the Damned eventually produced a full MST-style riff of the story in 2018, pairing it with the Mark II rewrite for comparison. The riff noted absurdities that casual readers might miss, like the fact that John's father warns him about demons, John stops believing the warning, but then demons actually show up, validating the paranoia.

The story gained unexpected retroactive significance when id Software released Doom (2016) and Doom Eternal. As TV Tropes documented, the coincidences between Chimaera's story and official Doom lore became striking. The protagonist being named "John" matched the name given to Doomguy in the 2005 movie adaptation, released three years after the fan fiction. The Slayer's Testament in Doom (2016) describes demons collapsing a temple on the Doom Slayer to contain him, echoing the ceiling collapse that traps John. The story's central theme of a soldier fighting demons until he mentally breaks mirrors Doom Eternal's flashback sequences showing Doomguy as a "complete mental wreck, shouting about how he needs to Kill them...must kill them all".

The connections go deeper. Doom Eternal's Ancient Gods DLC revealed the Dark Lord of Hell as an alternate-universe counterpart of the Doom Slayer, giving "You are the demons" an almost literal meaning. Doom: The Dark Ages featured a sequence where the Doom Slayer actually becomes a zombie, albeit temporarily, making the story's final line accidentally prophetic. Doom Eternal's planned Invasion Mode would have let players control demons in another player's campaign, while Battlemode already let players be demons, and one skin let the Slayer be a zombie.

The phrase "No, John. You are the demons" also found a parallel in Spec Ops: The Line (2012), whose twist ending features a soldier trapped in a losing battle discovering through a radio message that he himself is the true monster. Neither game appears to have directly referenced the fan fiction, but the structural similarity made the comparison irresistible to fans.

The story's "Narm" quality, its ability to be laughably bad while somehow landing emotional beats, kept it circulating long after most 2002-era fan fiction disappeared. "HE GOING TO KILL US" stands out as a particular favorite among fans for its panicked broken grammar. Lines like "he fired the rocket missiles" (redundant), "palsma rifle" (misspelled), and "as he got oldered" (not a word) all became quotable in their own right.

Fun Facts

The name "Stalvern" appears to have been invented for this story. A cursory Google search suggests it didn't exist as a surname before 2002.

Peter Chimaera naming the protagonist "John" accidentally predicted the 2005 Doom movie, which also named Doomguy "John" three years later.

The story's description of a collapsing ceiling trapping the player actually can happen in the original Doom games, where some crushing ceilings don't retract and can immobilize a surviving player inside the architecture.

The animated adaptation includes a gag where John blasts through a wall with his palsma rifle, then calmly uses a door just a few feet away.

Tom White maintained the Peter Chimaera persona for years, keeping a separate Fanfiction.net account (Hyena1) for properly written stories.

Derivatives & Variations

Doom: Repercussions of Evil Mark II

โ€” A full rewrite by Fanfiction.net user Osaka420 (February 11, 2008) that gives the story proper grammar and prose while preserving the plot, proving the Fiction Identity Postulate[4].

Garry's Mod adaptation

โ€” YouTuber riff1 created a Source engine machinima of the story (June 5, 2008)[4].

Flash animation

โ€” Newgrounds user Phobotech uploaded an animated version on December 13, 2010, receiving over 105,000 views[4].

Snowclone variations

โ€” Thousands of franchise-swapped versions exist, including X-COM, Macross/Robotech, Warhammer 40K, and many others, compiled on wikis like 1d4chan[6].

"No X, You are the Y" comics

โ€” DeviantArt hosts numerous comics and illustrations using the snowclone punchline format across various fandoms[9].

Dramatic readings and radio theater

โ€” Multiple YTMND pages and YouTube videos feature performed readings, including "Kraplan's Radio Theater" performances[8].

Frequently Asked Questions

Doom Repercussions Of Evil

2002Copypasta / fan fiction / snowclone templateclassic

Also known as: Repercussions of Evil ยท Peter Chimaera Doom fanfic

Doom Repercussions Of Evil is a 2002 Doom fan fiction by Peter Chimaera, known for terrible grammar and the twist: "No, John. You are the demons. And then John was a zombie.

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil is a 211-word Doom fan fiction written by Fanfiction.net user Peter Chimaera in 2002, famous for its deliberately terrible grammar and the twist ending "No, John. You are the demons / And then John was a zombie". The story spent years in obscurity before a YTMND dramatic reading in 2006 launched it into meme status, spawning thousands of parody variations, a TV Tropes trope, and an unlikely connection to official Doom canon.

TL;DR

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil is a 211-word Doom fan fiction written by Fanfiction.net user Peter Chimaera in 2002, famous for its deliberately terrible grammar and the twist ending "No, John.

Overview

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil tells the story of John Stalvern, a space marine who has spent fourteen years expecting a demon attack on his UAC base. When the demons arrive, his superior "Cernel Joson" orders him to fight. John grabs his "palsma rifle" and engages a cyberdemon, but the ceiling collapses and traps them both. Then the radio delivers the famous line: "No, John. You are the demons." And then John was a zombie.

The story packs an absurd amount of narrative into just 211 words. Every line is quotable, from the father's warning "You will BE KILL BY DEMONS" to the demons' panicked "HE GOING TO KILL US" to John's battle tactic of having "plasmaed at him." The writing style is a master class in wrong tenses ("gotted," "oldered," "crackered"), misspellings ("palsma," "listenend"), and rank confusion ("Cernel Joson").

What makes it work as a meme is the structure. The story follows a rigid template: character waits, flashback to a childhood warning, radio call to action, brief fight, ceiling collapse, twist ending. That template turned out to be infinitely adaptable.

Peter Chimaera first appeared on Fanfiction.net on March 19, 2002, posting a story called "Digimon Savez The Wrold!1111." Despite the obvious spelling disasters, reviewers responded positively and encouraged more submissions. On June 25, 2002, Chimaera published DOOM: Repercussions of Evil. Fanfiction.net moderators eventually removed it for its "intentionally and exceedingly poor grammar, spelling, and style".

Peter Chimaera was not a real person. The Fanfiction.net user Hyena1 revealed on his personal site that Chimaera was an alternate account he used specifically for posting badly written fan fiction. The real author, Tom White (who also went by the handle "Heisanevilgenius"), later confirmed the story was always meant as a stealth parody of poorly written fan fiction. As TV Tropes notes, writing that badly for seven years straight "seems suspicious," and those who were suspicious turned out to be right.

Chimaera's only Doom story, it sat alongside fan fiction for other franchises including The Matrix, Castlevania, and Batman, all written with the same joyfully broken English.

Origin & Background

Platform
Fanfiction.net (original publication), YTMND / 4chan (viral spread)
Key People
Tom White aka "Hyena" / "Heisanevilgenius"
Date
2002
Year
2002

Peter Chimaera first appeared on Fanfiction.net on March 19, 2002, posting a story called "Digimon Savez The Wrold!1111." Despite the obvious spelling disasters, reviewers responded positively and encouraged more submissions. On June 25, 2002, Chimaera published DOOM: Repercussions of Evil. Fanfiction.net moderators eventually removed it for its "intentionally and exceedingly poor grammar, spelling, and style".

Peter Chimaera was not a real person. The Fanfiction.net user Hyena1 revealed on his personal site that Chimaera was an alternate account he used specifically for posting badly written fan fiction. The real author, Tom White (who also went by the handle "Heisanevilgenius"), later confirmed the story was always meant as a stealth parody of poorly written fan fiction. As TV Tropes notes, writing that badly for seven years straight "seems suspicious," and those who were suspicious turned out to be right.

Chimaera's only Doom story, it sat alongside fan fiction for other franchises including The Matrix, Castlevania, and Batman, all written with the same joyfully broken English.

How It Spread

For the first four years after publication, Repercussions of Evil existed in near-total obscurity. That changed on April 19, 2006, when YTMND user Orlics created a page titled "DOOM: Repercussions of Evil" featuring a screenshot of the original Fanfiction.net post alongside a dramatic reading of the text. A second YTMND by user IWanaSoftTaco followed on May 12, 2006, with its own dramatic reading. The YTMND community embraced it, producing remixes and radio theater performances.

The story hit 4chan on July 25, 2007, when it was posted to the /b/ board. Users responded by creating illustrations of scenes from the story. An Encyclopedia Dramatica entry for Peter Chimaera appeared on July 7, 2007. Responding to the sudden interest, White republished the story and Chimaera's other removed works on a new website, PeterChimaera.com, launched December 2, 2007.

On February 11, 2008, Fanfiction.net user Osaka420 submitted "Doom: Repercussions of Evil Mark II," a complete rewrite in proper English that preserved the plot while giving it legitimate prose. A Garry's Mod adaptation by YouTuber riff1 appeared on June 5, 2008. On December 13, 2010, Newgrounds user Phobotech uploaded a Flash animation inspired by the story that pulled in over 105,000 views.

The story's twist ending proved so iconic that on August 3, 2010, TV Tropes created a dedicated trope page called "And Then John Was a Zombie," using the story as the trope namer for any plot where a protagonist literally becomes the monster they were fighting.

How to Use This Meme

The most common way people deploy Repercussions of Evil is through the snowclone template. Pick any franchise, game, or situation, then follow the structure:

1

The wait. "[Character] waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were [enemies] in the base."

2

The childhood flashback. Character tells dad they want to join [profession]. Dad says "No! You will BE KILL BY [enemies]."

3

The radio call. "This is [authority figure]" the radio crackered. "You must fight the [enemies]!"

4

The brief fight. Character "gotted his palsma rifle" (or equivalent weapon).

5

The ceiling. "But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill."

6

The twist. "No, [character]. You are the [enemies]." And then [character] was a [monster].

Cultural Impact

The story named a TV Tropes trope. "And Then John Was a Zombie" now covers any narrative where a protagonist literally transforms into the thing they were fighting, with examples cataloged across anime, film, television, and video games. The trope page lists hundreds of examples from media including Attack on Titan, Bleach, Dragon Ball Z, and The Walking Dead.

The story's influence on actual Doom canon, whether intentional or coincidental, became a running joke in the community. When Doom (2016) and Doom Eternal introduced lore elements that mirrored the fan fiction's plot points, fans treated it as vindication. TV Tropes lists the story under "Vindicated by History," noting a "new-found appreciation" after the modern games seemed to adapt its dialogue into official lore.

Peter Chimaera's other works, including a Batman fan fiction and two self-published books ("Peter Chimaera book of hsitorical faFfiction" and "Dracula 2010 and other things bu Peter Chimaera"), are available for purchase on the self-publishing platform Lulu.

Full History

The story's structure turned it into one of the internet's most prolific snowclone templates. The rigid format, character waits, childhood flashback, radio order, brief fight, ceiling collapse, twist, made swapping in new properties trivially easy. The 1d4chan wiki compiled a massive collection of variants: X-COM versions where "And then John was a Chryssalid," Zentraedi versions with Macross characters, and dozens of others spanning every fandom imaginable. The template's adaptability meant communities could claim their own version without needing to understand the original Doom reference.

On DeviantArt, artists produced visual interpretations of the story alongside snowclone comics using the "No X, You are the Y" format. The phrase itself broke free from the story entirely, becoming a standalone punchline for any absurd identity-swap twist.

A recurring bit of community etiquette emerged around the story: it became "common courtesy to write a review of this Fan Fic as if it's a literary classic studied in English classes". This play-along joke, treating the 211-word mess as serious literature worthy of academic analysis, added another layer to the meme. The Library of the Damned eventually produced a full MST-style riff of the story in 2018, pairing it with the Mark II rewrite for comparison. The riff noted absurdities that casual readers might miss, like the fact that John's father warns him about demons, John stops believing the warning, but then demons actually show up, validating the paranoia.

The story gained unexpected retroactive significance when id Software released Doom (2016) and Doom Eternal. As TV Tropes documented, the coincidences between Chimaera's story and official Doom lore became striking. The protagonist being named "John" matched the name given to Doomguy in the 2005 movie adaptation, released three years after the fan fiction. The Slayer's Testament in Doom (2016) describes demons collapsing a temple on the Doom Slayer to contain him, echoing the ceiling collapse that traps John. The story's central theme of a soldier fighting demons until he mentally breaks mirrors Doom Eternal's flashback sequences showing Doomguy as a "complete mental wreck, shouting about how he needs to Kill them...must kill them all".

The connections go deeper. Doom Eternal's Ancient Gods DLC revealed the Dark Lord of Hell as an alternate-universe counterpart of the Doom Slayer, giving "You are the demons" an almost literal meaning. Doom: The Dark Ages featured a sequence where the Doom Slayer actually becomes a zombie, albeit temporarily, making the story's final line accidentally prophetic. Doom Eternal's planned Invasion Mode would have let players control demons in another player's campaign, while Battlemode already let players be demons, and one skin let the Slayer be a zombie.

The phrase "No, John. You are the demons" also found a parallel in Spec Ops: The Line (2012), whose twist ending features a soldier trapped in a losing battle discovering through a radio message that he himself is the true monster. Neither game appears to have directly referenced the fan fiction, but the structural similarity made the comparison irresistible to fans.

The story's "Narm" quality, its ability to be laughably bad while somehow landing emotional beats, kept it circulating long after most 2002-era fan fiction disappeared. "HE GOING TO KILL US" stands out as a particular favorite among fans for its panicked broken grammar. Lines like "he fired the rocket missiles" (redundant), "palsma rifle" (misspelled), and "as he got oldered" (not a word) all became quotable in their own right.

Fun Facts

The name "Stalvern" appears to have been invented for this story. A cursory Google search suggests it didn't exist as a surname before 2002.

Peter Chimaera naming the protagonist "John" accidentally predicted the 2005 Doom movie, which also named Doomguy "John" three years later.

The story's description of a collapsing ceiling trapping the player actually can happen in the original Doom games, where some crushing ceilings don't retract and can immobilize a surviving player inside the architecture.

The animated adaptation includes a gag where John blasts through a wall with his palsma rifle, then calmly uses a door just a few feet away.

Tom White maintained the Peter Chimaera persona for years, keeping a separate Fanfiction.net account (Hyena1) for properly written stories.

Derivatives & Variations

Doom: Repercussions of Evil Mark II

โ€” A full rewrite by Fanfiction.net user Osaka420 (February 11, 2008) that gives the story proper grammar and prose while preserving the plot, proving the Fiction Identity Postulate[4].

Garry's Mod adaptation

โ€” YouTuber riff1 created a Source engine machinima of the story (June 5, 2008)[4].

Flash animation

โ€” Newgrounds user Phobotech uploaded an animated version on December 13, 2010, receiving over 105,000 views[4].

Snowclone variations

โ€” Thousands of franchise-swapped versions exist, including X-COM, Macross/Robotech, Warhammer 40K, and many others, compiled on wikis like 1d4chan[6].

"No X, You are the Y" comics

โ€” DeviantArt hosts numerous comics and illustrations using the snowclone punchline format across various fandoms[9].

Dramatic readings and radio theater

โ€” Multiple YTMND pages and YouTube videos feature performed readings, including "Kraplan's Radio Theater" performances[8].

Frequently Asked Questions